Natyr Lucio

Yeah, so the "upside umop" thing, that was incredibly original. Kudos to you for that. I loved the romance in the story, and I really like the realistic addition, that ...

Agreed, it was beautiful. However, I was able to provide some criticism. Your rhyme scheme, though cleverly placed in some areas, was choppy in others. Also, that line, "Fall for ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe because he was imaging pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe d pickles so Ann ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe because he was imaging pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe d pickles so Ann ...

Joe once smelled sushi coming from the toilet. Ann didn't give a potato to Joe because he was imaging pranks involving birds poop and underwear. Joe d pickles so Ann ...

Great rainbow-flowed fields Turn away from me And I wonder why as I defy gravity And, hovering three feet off the ground I will watch an era pass And I ...

This one made me smile, despite whatever reaction it was in fact meant to produce. There was a hint of psychotic predisposition that added to the sorrow it carried, and ...

This put me in a mentality of silence, and I liked the sort of divine point of view it had. The fragmented end really added to its strength, I believe.

This evoked very tasteful images, and I say tasteful under several different contexts. It was a wonderful poem, and just because of my predisposition to honor original flow patterns as ...